This was a rough draft and stated so, I just wrote, while letting my creative side let loose. There's a lot more work to be done, and I was only trying to share it with the group. I am a college graduate, and I have credible sources from many different higher institutions of learning telling me that my writing is strong. If my writing is so horrible, why then do I place in the 90th percentile for the GRE--a graduate level exam who holds more credibility than some anonymous person behind a keyboard. I am a good person, with a good heart, who's honest, and cares a great deal about people. You don't know me, yet you can judge me from a rough draft that I was nice enough to share with you.