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Have script, looking for feedback/videographer

Discussion in 'Production Studio' started by keytothesocket, Oct 1, 2011.

  1. so made a script the other night and just throwing it out there for feedback and/or anyone who want's to take on making a vid for it (I blow at making videos). The only request I'd make is that there are 0 images in the video with a linkback anywhere (one of the issues I was having with searching for stock anon footage is that a lot of the gfx had a nice VISIT MY WEBSITE style plug somewhere in the video...)

    Anyway, links and shit below

    (w/ and w/o music at link): http://soundcloud.com/keytothesocket
    text:

    PS. Wrote this along the RevoluSec style (good example up here: http://www.youtube.com/user/mmxanonymous#p/a/u/0/gwhn0x4q254 ), mainly the style I looked to for inspiration.
  2. Durga Member

    The balance of music and voice is about right, we've seen a lot of videos where the voice is drowned out by the background music. I'm not a huge fan of the voice you chose, and there are a couple places where it feels like you need longer breaks between ideas.
  3. Yeah, I think that was mainly the program I was using for the voice. Wasn't a whole lot of "play room" when I was doing the voice. Wish I could find a different TTS voice.
  4. Durga Member

    Did you try adding extra punctuation? Ellipses and grammatically incorrect periods help in a lot of TTS systems when you need longer gaps.
  5. word, i should give it a shot

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