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  1. COMPLETE Press Release: Clearwater business petition MAN HARPOONS!

    There's been a few requests for a statement regarding the recent actions by Scilons in Clearwater: using signatures from the many business they run in that area for a petition that would stop the protests altogether or move them to an area with less human traffic.

    All the info on it can be found in this thread here. Have a link to the body of the petition too.

    OP will be updated with good edits.

    NEWEST VERSION:

    PLZ TO TURN OFF "Automatically parse links in text" if you're posting edits!
  2. Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Denying service to Anons?! Info please!!!
  3. xzoz01 Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    I wonder if you could get some store owners from others cities that are around COS locations and get an account at how their business actually increased because of anonymous patronage. The same would have happened in Clearwater, except signs were displayed forbidding anonymous members from entering. Not to mention, if you weren't up to date about the Anonymous/Scientology feud and saw a sign in front of a business saying "We don't serve anonymous," you'd probably figure it was some sort of private club and not enter. Companies that turn away business typically get less business.
  4. XenuLovesU Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Here's the compiled data from the original thread at:

    http://forums.whyweprotest.net/15-breaking-news/anonymous-stifles-clearwater-businesses-13738/

    ISSUES:

    1. Redundant signatures for the same business
    2. Unlicensed / non-existent business
    3. Businesses listed that are not anywhere near the protest route
    7. Invididuals with no connection to a business signing
    4. Stores claiming protests have affected their business even though they had "anonymous not welcome" signs up
    5. Businesses that are closed on the weekend still claiming protests affect their business
    6. A Scientologist on the city council appears to have faxed this petition from his office
    7. All but two of the fully legible / complete entries are from scientologists or scientologist-owned businesses. Where are the "regular" merchants that don't have any other agenda?


    FORMAT:

    Person's Name
    Business Name
    Business Address
    Supporting Links (showing Scientology connection)
    Notes

    1 Margaret Seabloom (scientologist)
    Skin Perfection Studio
    No business by that name found
    Margaret Seabloom - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    2 Cary Goulston (scientologist)
    Salon Bravo
    409 Cleveland St, 33755
    Scientology - Cary Goulston a Scientologist - find out what I have gained from Scientology...

    3 Illegible
    Rose's Jewelry
    No business by that name found
    Invalid

    4 Beatrice A.
    One Stoppe Shoppe (scientologist owned business)
    411 Cleveland St, 33755
    One Stoppe Shoppe - About Our Stoppe Store
    Paris Morfopoulos - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    5 Valorie Shillington (scientologist)
    The Rabbit Hole Cafe
    425 Cleveland St, 33755
    Valorie Shillington - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    6 Jeff P. Hendrick (scientologist)
    Jeffpaulco
    No business by that name found
    Jeffrey P. Hendrick - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    7 Louise Stephens
    High Point Realty (scientologist owned business)
    413 Cleveland Street, 33755
    High Point Real Estate Home Page
    David Kerr - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    8 Jim Valco (scientologist)
    NuLean Nutritional Supplements
    No business by that name found
    Jim Valco - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    9 Liz Adams (scientologist)
    Clearwater Realty
    519 Cleveland St # 100, 33755
    Liz Adams - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    10 Diana Rejell
    Peter Gillham's Vitamins (scientologist owned business)
    411 Cleveland St, 33755
    Peter F. Gillham - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    11 Illegible
    Helen's Tayloring
    423 Cleveland St # 102, 32755
    Unconfirmed connection

    12 Janice Batey (scientologist)
    The People Link Inc
    423 Cleveland St, 33755
    Janice Batey - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    13 Susan D. Player (scientologist)
    Illegible
    Impossible to look up
    Susan D. Player - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project
    Note: There is a Susan Player, Chiropractor at 1433 Gulf to Bay Blvd. Not on protest route

    14 Paris Morfopoulos (scientologist)
    One Stoppe Shoppe
    411 Cleveland St, 32755
    Paris Morfopoulos - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project[/QUOTE]
  5. XenuLovesU Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Continued (for some reason the database barfs it I try to put it all in one post)

    15 Ingrid Collewijn (scientologist)
    Health Motion PT serv
    No business by that name found
    Ingrid Collewijn - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    16 Caroline Veach (scientologist)
    World Financial Group 639
    Cleveland St #200, 33755
    Caroline Veach - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    17 Illegible
    Illegible
    519 Cleveland St, 33755
    WISE 2001 Directory

    18 Paul Hernandez (scientologist)
    Cleavland St. Café *** CLOSED SATURDAYS (hours M-F 7:30 AM to 4:00 PM)
    615 Cleveland St, 32755
    Paulo Cesar Reyes Hernandez - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    19 Illegible
    Stonebridge Real Estate (scientologist owned business)
    1465 S Fort Harrison Ave # 103 33756
    Repeat of #31 (same scientologist owned business)

    20 Illegible
    Illegible
    No address
    Invalid

    21 Illegible, CEO is Ron Dean (does company know their name is on list?)
    Groupware International (company name scratched out)
    601 Cleveland St, 33764
    Unconfirmed connection

    22 Angela Gioffre (scientologist)
    G&P Fashion Service
    409 Cleveland St, 33755
    Angela Gioffre - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    23 Jasmine Salan (scientologist)
    La Bella Hair Studio
    123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
    Jasmine Salan - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    24 Joanna Hanos (scientologist)
    Botanica Day Spa
    123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
    Same business as #24

    25 Gen Cournoyer (scientologist)
    Botanica Day Spa
    123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
    Gen Cournoyer - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    26 Ugo Moi (scientologist)
    Cafe Milano
    105 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
    Ugo Moi - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project
    Note: No business license found

    27 Michelle Lea Robertson (scientologist)
    Bellissima Salon & Spa
    101 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
    Michelle Lea Robertson - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    28 Robin Hoss (sp?)
    Pangea Café (scientologist owned business)
    34 North Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
    Note: Owned by Geri Aranjo and Sylvia Heneghan

    29 Rose (illegible)
    LaRose Soup & Salad
    No business by that name found
    Invalid
    Note: No business license found

    30 Gro Miller (scientologist)
    Florida Gulf Coast Homes *** Had "anonymous not welcome" sign in window
    631 Cleveland St, 32755
    Invalid
    Scientology Statistics Database - Search Results

    31 Brian Andrus (scientologist)
    Stonebridge Real Estate
    1465 S Fort Harrison Ave # 103, 33756
    The Brian & Donna Andrus Family - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project

    32 Linda (illegible)
    Resident
    None
    Invalid

    33 Brian Kirby
    Annie Rose Deli
    647 Cleveland St, 32755
    Unconfirmed connection

    34 Louis J. Chacones
    Angie's Restaurant
    725 Cleveland St, 32755
    Unconfirmed connection

    35 Charlene Townsend
    Cosmos Realty
    6 S Myrtle Ave, 33756 *** Is this even on protest route?
    Note: Cosmos Realy = Louis J. Chacones and Charlene Townsend (see 34)

    36 Julie Tucker
    Clearwater Classics
    No business by that name found

    37 Wallace Woodbury (scientologist)
    Aesthetic Mind Studios
    411 Cleveland Street #105, 33755
    Wallace Woodbury - Scientology Service Completions | Truth About Scientology Statistics Project
  6. John_Doe Member

  7. Skeptic1337 Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Some images:

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  8. Top Grunge Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    #30 is Gro Miller, confirmed Scieno.

    So the confirmed count is 28 out of 37~~?!?!?!
  9. XenuLovesU Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Some quick stats:

    Out of 37 total signatures...

    26 came from identified scientologists or scientologist owned businesses.

    8 were either illegible, came from a person not representing a business, or from a business that doesn't appear to exists (no license or business phone directory listing found).

    2 appear to be dupes for the same business, just different names.

    So... that means that

    26 of the 27 (valid, non-dupe) signatures came from someone with a scientology agenda. That's 96% of the valid signatures. I bet that number would be even higher with a little more digging.

    Yeah -- clearly no hidden agenda here.

    Oooh... wait -- we can knock Paul Hernandez off of the "valid" signatories because his freakin' business isn't open on Saturdays.

    100% WIN!

    I'm going to lunch.
  10. Skeptic1337 Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    For this press release don't connect the dots, just the facts.

    Any one with half a brain will connect them for us.

    If no one starts writing it soon I'll give my hand at it in a sec.
  11. Top Grunge Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    I want to point out too most petitions are measured in hundreds, if not in thousands!

    And they were able get 37 people to cry. 37.
  12. XenuLovesU Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    oooh -- nice job digging those up :smile:
  13. Consensus Member

    As far as phrasing with the press release...
    This is generally going to be regarded as a local issue. Further, if we put out a press release saying 'Hey, local businesses in clearwater are annoyed by Anonymous!' we run the risk of other businesses in other cities going 'hey, y'know, my business does suffer when they're outside....'

    I think the press release should be written up as a follow-up to the press release about the failed injunctions in clearwater. This should be clearly described as further attempts to thwart the right to assembly and free speech. We should clarify that the right to assembly prevents GOVERNMENT action from interfering with our protests, and that this is yet another attempt by Scientology to manipulate the Government to denying us our rights.

    edit: For reference
    Now that we have a press page, we should reduce the number of references to anonymous sites. We're also well-known enough that we don't need to explain what anonymous is in more than one sentence. The final link should be to the press room page [http://www.enturbulation.org/press-media], which I'll try to update and get cleaned up tonight (here's hoping wordpress isn't still doing that 'rn' bug thing).
  14. Skeptic1337 Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Needs lots of work but I think it's a start.
  15. Consensus Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Lead:
    The Church of Scientology in Clearwater Florida is once again attempting to impede the rights of US citizens to free assembly and free speech.

    [paragraph about fraudulent petition]

    [paragraph about past efforts to thwart free speech, including failed petition for restraining order]

    [brief explanation of Anonymous]

    [detailed explanation; talking-point quote from 'a member of anonymous']

    [for more information... press page]

    [references]
  16. Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Better start than mine, now to clean up some mistakes.

  17. Consensus Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Made a few edits, paired it down a bit. I haven't looked at the OP's yet, I'll do that next.
  18. Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    I deleted the one I had in the OP since after looking at it I realized it read more like an angry blog entry than a press release. Sorry.

    Though I do vote for including that the same business who signed the petitions were denying service to Anonymous earlier in the month.
  19. Consensus Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    I'll work it into the version I'm working on. I just didn't have an obvious spot for it. Also, for anybody working on this, write it as if it will be FAXED to the press. Hyperlinks should not 'hide' information (for clicking). It helps to turn off the 'automatically parse links' option when posting.
  20. D... Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    This might sound silly but what about potentially adding the fact that we have found out that some businesses have been pressured to put up "No Anonymous" signs- as per Starbucks blog?
  21. Consensus Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    It's relevant, but the story has to flow. Imagine the person reading it only knows that Anonymous has been holding protests world-wide. We're letting them know that in one city, Scientology has tried to prevent the legal protests. We have to find a place to fit that in.

    We also need it sharp and concise. I know there's an urge to include every bit of relevant info, but if we do that, it becomes too much for any journalist to research or print. We want as few facts as possible, all supported by outside sources, and we want those facts to tell a story that's interesting and news-worthy.
  22. Skeptic1337 Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    You'd need clear evidence of that. A starbucks statement would go a long way. My guess is they probably want nothing to do with this but worth a shot if some one has their number.
  23. womanon Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    fax number is the city hall office of a scientologist...

    Fax is from "95624052". You can turn this into a phone number by removing the "9" which is commonly used as an inside-to-outside line extension. This leaves us with the phone number 562-4052. The area code for Clearwater FL is 727.

    727-562-4052 Result:

    Pinellas Suncoast Transit Authority
    Paul Gibson
    Councilmember
    Clearwater City Hall
    Telephone: (727) 562-4050
    Fax: (727) 562-4052


    STOP-WISE.BIZ : World Institute of Scientology Enterprises 1999 directory
    Food Cart Systems, Inc.
    Paul F. Gibson
    533 Cleveland St.
    Clearwater, FL 33755-4007
  24. XenuLovesU Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    My quote, if it's worthy:

    (replace "Councilman" with his name... whatever that was)
  25. Consensus Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    newest version, suggestions wanted, please double-check my links, etc
  26. XenuLovesU Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Confirmation is now up to 30. Gro Miller (#30) was identified, as well as biz on #1 List on page 1 updated.
  27. Consensus Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Updated.

    Nonetheless, the math on that sentence doesn't work. 'Of the 8 remaining, 8 are illegible and 2 are duplicates.' Can we clarify that?

    edit: also, if that research can be posted on a static website that we can link to, it would be helpful. Right now I have tinyurls pointing to your posts on this forum. Any journalist that wants to do digging can work with that, but if they just want to glance at it, the forum won't satisfy them.
  28. Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    If there's still two that are duplicates, then it means someone must have been able to decipher more of the signatures that were previously illegible.
  29. XenuLovesU Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Working on tidying up the numbers. Back shortly.
  30. XenuLovesU Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Okay... rather than doing any math, I'll just post the raw findings so y'all can present them however seems most appropriate.

    Total signatories: 37

    Illegible signatory names: 6

    3 Illegible Rose's Jewelry
    11 Illegible Helen's Tayloring
    17 Illegible Illegible
    19 Illegible Stonebridge Real Estate
    20 Illegible Illegible
    21 Illegible Groupware International

    Illegible business names: 3

    17 Illegible Illegible 519 Cleveland St, 33755
    20 Illegible Illegible No address
    13 Susan D. Player Illegible Impossible to look up

    Repeat signatories for same business: 6

    25 Gen Cournoyer Botanica Day Spa 123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
    24 Joanna Hanos Botanica Day Spa 123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755

    31 Brian Andrus Stonebridge Real Estate 1465 S Fort Harrison Ave # 103, 33756
    19 Illegible Stonebridge Real Estate 1465 S Fort Harrison Ave # 103, 33756

    14 Paris Morfopoulos One Stoppe Shoppe 411 Cleveland St, 32755
    4 Beatrice A. One Stoppe Shoppe 411 Cleveland St, 33755

    Businesses that can't be found: 7

    36 Julie Tucker Clearwater Classics No business by that name found
    15 Ingrid Collewijn Health Motion PT serv No business by that name found
    6 Jeff P. Hendrick Jeffpaulco No business by that name found
    29 Rose (illegible) LaRose Soup & Salad No business by that name found
    8 Jim Valco NuLean Nutritional Supplements No business by that name found
    3 Illegible Rose's Jewelry No business by that name found
    1 Margaret Seabloom Skin Perfection Studio No business by that name found

    Non-business signatories: 1

    32 Linda (illegible) Resident None
  31. womanon Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    I propose alterations to
    tweaked version (with legal mumbo jumbo):

    edit- it's very important to point out that the second filing was denied with prejudice
    [if anyone is confused, the word "prejudice" has a different meaning in court language. It's a judge's way of saying, "i'm tired of dealing with you, so get the f*ck out and take your b.s. filings with you".]
  32. XenuLovesU Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Put another way, each of the entries in the list above has one or more reasons it isn't valid. If I normalize the list, this means that these entries:

    1
    3
    6
    8
    11
    13
    14
    15
    17
    19
    20
    21
    25
    29
    31
    32
    36

    have issues.

    If we remove the invalid ones from the list, that only leaves:

    2 Cary Goulston Salon Bravo 409 Cleveland St, 33755
    4 Beatrice A. One Stoppe Shoppe 411 Cleveland St, 33755
    5 Valorie Shillington The Rabbit Hole Cafe 425 Cleveland St, 33755
    7 Louise Stephens High Point Realty 413 Cleveland Street, 33755
    9 Liz Adams Clearwater Realty 519 Cleveland St # 100, 33755
    10 Diana Rejell Peter Gillham's Vitamins 411 Cleveland St, 33755
    12 Janice Batey The People Link Inc 423 Cleveland St, 33755
    14 Paris Morfopoulos One Stoppe Shoppe 411 Cleveland St, 32755
    16 Caroline Veach World Financial Group 639 Cleveland St #200, 33755
    18 Paul Hernandez Cleavland St. Café 615 Cleveland St, 32755
    22 Angela Gioffre G&P Fashion Service 409 Cleveland St, 33755
    23 Jasmine Salan La Bella Hair Studio 123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
    24 Joanna Hanos Botanica Day Spa 123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
    25 Gen Cournoyer Botanica Day Spa 123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
    26 Ugo Moi Cafe Milano 105 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
    27 Michelle Lea Robertson Bellissima Salon & Spa 101 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
    28 Robin Hoss(sp) Pangea Café 34 North Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
    30 Gro Miller Florida Gulf Coast Homes 631 Cleveland St, 32755
    31 Brian Andrus Stonebridge Real Estate 1465 S Fort Harrison Ave # 103, 33756
    33 Brian Kirby Annie Rose Deli 647 Cleveland St, 32755
    34 Louis J. Chacones Angie's Restaurant 725 Cleveland St, 32755
    35 Charlene Townsend Cosmos Realty 6 S Myrtle Ave, 33756
    37 Wallace Woodbury Aesthetic Mind Studios 411 Cleveland Street #105, 33755

    All, except 3... #'s 33, 34, 35 (21 out of 24) in the remaining list are Scientologists or
    Scientologist owned.


    tl;dr out of the 37 sigs, only 24 hold water. Out of those 24, 21 have been identified as having ties to scientology. 85% of valid entries have scientology ties.
  33. XenuLovesU Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Even better, here's the same data so you can pull it into a spreadsheet and play with it all you want (tab delimited):

    Code:
    sig no	valid	name	business name	address	links and notes
    1	n	Margaret  Seabloom	Skin Perfection Studio	No business by that name found	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/m/margaret-seabloom.html
    2		Cary Goulston	Salon Bravo	"409 Cleveland St, 33755"	http://scientologist.myhomepage.org/~carygoulston/
    3	n	Illegible	Rose's Jewelry	No business by that name found	Invalid
    4		Beatrice A.	One Stoppe Shoppe	"411 Cleveland St, 33755"	http://www.onestoppeshoppe.com/aboutus.htm http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/p/paris-morfopoulos.html
    5		Valorie Shillington	The Rabbit Hole Cafe	"425 Cleveland St, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/v/valorie-shillington.html
    6	n	Jeff P. Hendrick	Jeffpaulco	No business by that name found	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/j/jeffrey-p.-hendrick.html
    7		Louise Stephens	High Point Realty	"413 Cleveland Street, 33755"	http://www.highpointrealtycorp.com/ http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/d/david-kerr.html
    8	n	Jim Valco	NuLean Nutritional Supplements	No business by that name found	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/j/jim-valco.html
    9		Liz Adams	Clearwater Realty	"519 Cleveland St # 100, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/l/liz-adams.html
    10		Diana Rejell	Peter Gillham's Vitamins	"411 Cleveland St, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/p/peter-f.-gillham.html
    11	n	Illegible	Helen's Tayloring	"423 Cleveland St # 102, 32755"	Unconfirmed
    12		Janice Batey	The People Link Inc	"423 Cleveland St, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/j/janice-batey.html
    13	n	Susan D. Player	Illegible	Impossible to look up	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/s/susan-d.-player.html
    14	n dupe	Paris Morfopoulos	One Stoppe Shoppe	"411 Cleveland St, 32755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/p/paris-morfopoulos.html
    15	n	Ingrid Collewijn	Health Motion PT serv	No business by that name found	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/i/ingrid-collewijn.html
    16		Caroline Veach	World Financial Group	"639 Cleveland St #200, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/c/caroline-veach.html
    17	n	Illegible	Illegible	"519 Cleveland St, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/wise/wise_2001_directory.html
    18		Paul Hernandez	Cleavland St. Café	"615 Cleveland St, 32755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/p/paulo-cesar-reyes-hernandez.html
    19	n dupe	Illegible	Stonebridge Real Estate	"1465 S Fort Harrison Ave # 103, 33756"	Repeat of #31 (same scientologist owned business)
    20	n	Illegible	Illegible	No address	Invalid
    21	n	Illegible	Groupware International	"601 Cleveland St, 33764"	Invalid
    22		Angela Gioffre	G&P Fashion Service	"409 Cleveland St, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/a/angela-gioffre.html
    23		Jasmine Salan	La Bella Hair Studio	"123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/j/jasmine-salan.html
    24		Joanna Hanos	Botanica Day Spa	"123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755"	"Same business as #24, confirmed scientologist"
    25	n dupe	Gen Cournoyer	Botanica Day Spa	"123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/g/gen-cournoyer.html
    26		Ugo Moi	Cafe Milano	"105 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/u/ugo-moi.html
    27		Michelle Lea Robertson	Bellissima Salon & Spa	"101 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/m/michelle-lea-robertson.html
    28		Robin Hoss(sp)	Pangea Café	"34 North Fort Harrison Ave, 33755"	Scientologist owned business
    29	n	Rose (illegible)	LaRose Soup & Salad	No business by that name found	Invalid
    30		Gro Miller	Florida Gulf Coast Homes	"631 Cleveland St, 32755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/g/gro-miller.html
    31		Brian Andrus	Stonebridge Real Estate	"1465 S Fort Harrison Ave # 103, 33756"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/t/the-brian-&-donna-andrus-family.html
    32	n	Linda (illegible)	Resident	None	Invalid
    33		Brian Kirby	Annie Rose Deli	"647 Cleveland St, 32755"	Unconfirmed
    34		Louis J. Chacones	Angie's Restaurant	"725 Cleveland St, 32755"	Unconfirmed
    35		Charlene Townsend	Cosmos Realty	"6 S Myrtle Ave, 33756"	Unconfirmed
    36	n	Julie Tucker	Clearwater Classics	No business by that name found	Unconfirmed
    37		Wallace Woodbury	Aesthetic Mind Studios	"411 Cleveland Street #105, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/w/wallace-woodbury.html
    
  34. capriciouss Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Nice work so far on the press release, GJ anons.
  35. Skeptic1337 Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Let me see if I can work the math into something not completely confusing and make that sentence a little less fail. Edit incoming.

  36. XenuLovesU Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    This is why I leave the wordsmithing to others :p
  37. Skeptic1337 Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Edited for a boil down. Might want to add a conclusionary sentence to it like

    "That indicates that of the original 37 signatories there are only 21 valid signatures all of which have long standing ties to the church of scientology forwarding this petition."
  38. XenuLovesU Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    Sounds good to me.
  39. Consensus Member

    Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    I'm presently working on the press page; we have a glitch with wordpress, so I'm having to do all the editing in raw html, and as block-o-text (as line feeds get changed to the letters 'rn'). When I'm done, we'll have a nice place to stick the final product of this thread on the main page (in addition to sending it out via e-mail).

    As such, I'm a bit busy right now so I'm ducking out of this project for the moment. I like how it's shaping up, keep it going!
  40. Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

    What we have so far:

    Some more tinkering with the third paragraph would be welcome. I edited it some, but it could be better.

    edit: wow, what the hell happened to the second reference?
    edit edit: oh, they're tinyurls.

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